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Murder At Age 10 by Dirvayn Murder At Age 10 by Dirvayn
The poem is my own, however the kid was photographed by someone and I found it online. If anyone has anything to say about it, please tell me I would love feedback, plus if you have any recommendations or such for this kind of art (or poetry i guess) please tell me. Mostly this kind of emotional poetry is what I focus on. And it is usually free-written
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Soul-Seer Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
Can you please repost this just as text and the poem, I'm very interested in reading it but I can't read it well enough to really feel I understand it.
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Pandemic-Art Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008  Student Photographer
Do you know what country that picture was taken in?
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Dirvayn Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
HEYYY im back - i switched to Net Nanny, which doesnt block DA - so now im on again... I'll be posting stuff soon enough

That photograph>?? I think Liberia... I typed in Liberia Child Soldier and i got that....
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Pandemic-Art Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Student Photographer
Sweet!
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bblk Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2008
The only thing I have to say that in some parts it's a little hard to read. Besides that, it's nicely written, and I really like how the picture is in the back. :heart:
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Dirvayn Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2008
thanks, yeah i realized that. Maybe the next one I do I'll kind of fog over the picture, and put the poem over. Most of what I write are free verse, but right now I'm trying to create one that will rhyme, so I could do that with the next one.
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